During English this week I have learnt how
to make my Hero sound like more of a Hero, by describing how he is a role model
and now also I have found some extremely relevant information about my Hero
Steven Gerrard. He own his own charity. It is named ‘The Steven Gerrard
Foundation’. I have practiced more research and editing skills on my paper.
Also I am proud of my use of feedback given by classmates and my teachers. I
would like to improve on my structure slightly just in order to make it link
better. I will achieve my goals by working hard and using more feedback.